[These poems were "published" by Stephen Carpenter in mimeograph form circa 1970, when Steve was 18. They appear to have
been final versions of evolved drafts in his notebook(s). Perhaps because he was so theatrically parsimonious, he squeezed the poetry onto each of two pages since even mimeo may have seemed extravagant. Aligned
horizontally, each line was delineated by a slash (/). Now, in 2000, when reproduction costs are slight, they are presented vertically, as aligned in his handwritten drafts. – G. Imrie] that final realization after years of waiting for some proof (they were long) i made the realization that it was not i who will save us or lead us it will be someone else and i was so sure
this poet writes listen to me now i may even be profound i'm young and have much to tell but i can't piece it all together yet i'm only a beginner at this i don't deserve capitals and punctuation like the masters please listen maybe someday i'll have more to say there is still time finally i can say even god while resting on the seventh day after six days of creating could not feel more contented than i do now -- if a feeling like this should ever leave my heart i will surely
be no more the others
it's good to think that someday i'll be dead like all the others sometimes i've wondered if i might just be that first unlucky one to the rabbit to the rabbit that i ran over on the road the other day know now that i didn't feel as the others do after killing you i would have cried for you but i knew you were already gone when it's over and when this is all over only then will they know but will i a walk in the park the day i wandered through my park
and looked up at my trees i wondered how the trees used to feel without me there will i be given will i be given the time necessary to make enough mistakes to be wise someday so that i may hang out my shingle reading "answers to the more important questions given here" my favorite poem my favorite poem is the one i scratched out and can no longer read when the dreams fail when my dreams fail and my limitations are set
i'll be swept into my next phase
[next page, of two original pages of mimeos]
tree in the woods i used to dream of having a tree deep in the woods to which i'd take my special friends to carve their initials but i dreamed many things [Since Steve wrote this years before concentrating on Yeats' poetry, would he have known
about Yeats' autograph tree yet? See the first few paragraphs of this review link.
http://www.theatlantic.com/issues/97nov/yeats.htm] searching while working in the ice cream store
i used to search each child's face wondering if he could be experiencing just what i did at his age i never found him though the store was open years before i worked there and I wonder if in that time someone searched my face looking for me
calling me another i smile at them they keep telling me
that others have experienced what i feel now and that others have had my frustrations and even my dreams then they always add that in the end
for everyone's sake i'll be just another but i can't believe that yet and they laugh at me if they only knew if they only knew who is walking down their halls singing to himself tribute to the mountain i had a tribute planned to be left
on the mountain that i was to conquer but i never even reached it [Steve's last mountain, Ben Bulben, viewed from Rosses Point, outside Sligo, Ireland.] http://www.petergillen.com/rossespoint/rp13.JPG ] all that i wish all that i wish is to have a little time to have my peace i've probably been given
too much already |